Slayin it. Good to hear ya rapping, it's been a long minute since I've hear sick tracks for ya. Keep up
Slayin it. Good to hear ya rapping, it's been a long minute since I've hear sick tracks for ya. Keep up
Thanks a lot man. How you been?
This is good. Verses are on point and hit some relevant AF hits while still maintaining that Teqneekee wordplay. Imagery shines here for ya." I put a cigarette backwards in my mouth and it burnt my lip" "I’m lookin' at my door and noticin’ an eviction notice is lookin' back". Flow was a bit rushed on some those multi syllable words near the beginning of some bars. I thoroughly enjoyed the 4th wall break in the last verse about the chorus/bridge. My issue with the chorus/bridge is:"It’s the worst day since the first day that the curse came//
…It’s the worst day since Earth Day, //" I think these lines are forced and disrupt the pattern; you go through days of the week, then jump to biblical references and hippy talk, Kinda spurious In my opinion. But ya, this is a dope track.
Thanks Mickey. I want to be your friend I hope you know that.
Wow, that is some crazy flash picking there! Damn man, impressive! Always good to hear from ya!
It's a torture of passion
Teddy Graham's beat is elegant and bumping. 5/5 stars for Teddy's superb beat.
Teqneek...I apologize in advance for this, but...
This is just low and petty. From the repetitive and simple lyrics to the squeaky singing, this just felt cheap. The "wordplay" on Monica, (which you delivered with a softer "g" sound instead of the phonetic "cK" sound), wow, smh, grow up. At first I thought this was a real yet corny as fuck love song, but once I stopped reading those rap-a-dappy lyrics, and started listening...I realized, this is just an excuse. Congrats on the genius wordplay, buddy! Way to beat it like a dead horse.
+The mixing sounds good. I just listened through laptop speakers tho.
+basic song structure sounds aight, verses transition into hooks well.
Not once did I pronounce Monica with a G. That is dumb and your laptop speakers are playing with your absolutely humorless mind.
I'd go on but it's not worth the effort. You're a pro troll and I must resist. Ughhh
this is dope, nice variations throughout, loving it
Thanks Mao!
this is weird, and I like it.
Thanks Mick!
this is dope, def should develop it more
Thanks dude i shall!
Wow, this is an exceptional instrumental. The chorus is really good and the voice grooves well with this beat. NW brodo
Thank you.
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