very MF Doomish. Has its own touch too, liked the subtle pitch change on the sample, works really nice!
very MF Doomish. Has its own touch too, liked the subtle pitch change on the sample, works really nice!
thanks!
feels like a morning after a wild adventure in the sofa.
every morning
I love it.
Has a eerie black/white film noir feel, then the western themes kick in. Very interesting distorted vocal sampling. Me loves breaks so that bridge was dope. Don't have much criticism, just that you keep teasing me w/dat WAV, I getting blue balls here!!!
Thanks Mickey!
Samus is spot on! Nice range!
Oh man sorry for replying so late, thanks a lot! I appreciate it a bunch!~
I took a few takes for samus, I really wanted to get that whole "detached and tired" feeling for her. It seemed like it would fit~
Beat production is dope, no surprise there. Lyrics; on point, loving the introspective narrative, with some f-u attitude. Rhymes is good. I would recommend looking at a couple bars here and there to help build more schemes and patterns into the verse.At points it reads as if there are forced consecutive rhymes in some lines. For example:
My mom’s got a man who doesn't want to understand her skill;
Earth's at a standstill, everyone sits and shits while man shoots and kills;
Some take pills, others poke themselves with quills;
My writings take understanding will and power;
After a clean shower I flower while I glower at your steep inclinations;
Don't want an invitation to your divine inspiration;
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Mom's got a man, (shit!) doesn't understand her skill
She's at a stand-still. So we sit while the man shoots to kill
Take some pills, or poke yourself with the quill
I write to understand this, it takes power and will
As I shower my flower, I see your steep inclinations
I'm not wow'd by the tower, you can keep the invitation
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Anyway, thats my 2 cents and a loonie. Solid concept, can't wait to hear when Avatar Caine is ready to drop!
Thanks for the pointers Mick!
I'll see how your edit flows out loud and contemplate whether to change it or not. Likely will, but it remains to be seen.
This is so flowable and smooth. That easy jazzy kazoo echo and the keys hit so nicely. Awesome work here.
Thanks a lot! That's the feel I was going for!
I like this. Very jammy and organic. Also very positive on the vibes :)
Thank you for the review! I appreciate the kind words and I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
this is beautiful. greats layers on it. Perfect for an intro/outro I'd say!
Thank you!
m damn this is gritty and pretty, unique sound to it
Thanks mick I was worried that I sounded too low
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