Fuckin eh!
I gotta show my props to my Canadian brethren. This is a great track you got here; the flow is tight, lyrics are clever, the song is catchy. Keep at it man, peace
Fuckin eh!
I gotta show my props to my Canadian brethren. This is a great track you got here; the flow is tight, lyrics are clever, the song is catchy. Keep at it man, peace
Ch'Yah!
The beat is bumpin, all the rappers got flow and intelligent lines. This track is great. The multiple emcees working with a unified/continuous verses reminds me of Sweat-Shop Union or some Jurassic 5 style. Props ya'll, keep at it!
Thanks for the props :) It's tough to get more than a couple Mc's on the same page so to speak. This one worked out pretty well. We will keep at it! Sometimes it seems too many people miss the ethos of Hip-hop, which is not Comercialized bullshit.
From the heart and soul; if anything, people can at least acknowledge we have passion-
Once again thanks for the input!
You're a fuckin asshole!
Why'd have to go and make me all depressed, that aint cool man!
But in all seriousness, this track is deep. My favourite flow moment was at the "But the sedatives force him to lie still and emulate-The dead" part, you mastered this beat. The last line: "Doctor hears no pulse so he arrives in haste Sees the kid on the floor, smile on his face"-> damn... thats almost as sad as that scene in King Kong when the big ape gets face fucked with chlorophyll...a single tear came out.
The mixing on this track is also exceptional. There are a few spots where it could have been touched up. For example: you can hear some parts when the mic was moved while recording.
Overall great track: I never expected this track to be so powerful when I read the verses on Facebook, props bro. Keep at it! How about make some positive happy tracks? Possibly about leprechauns and/or jackalopes.
leprechauns and jackalopes having sex with each other
Geat track
Im diggin the flow and the storytelling on this one. The overdubs sound too obvious in some places (mainly at the begining). Overall its a great track, keep at it.
Haha, yeah, I'm working on those. I don't actually like them at all, I'm not really good at them, I just figured I would try. If I keep muckin around I'll get something right someday! Thanks for the review!
Quite Awesome-tastic
Interesting concept here. Its cool how your first fan wrote a bit of this. Asides from recording quality this is a wicked track. Lyrics are good, flow/emotion are spot on, and the beat is passionate.
I've been a fan of your music for awhile now, can I get a collab too? :D
Yes you certainly may get a colab =]. Send me a sound clip of you and i'll make a beat to it and write my own.
Old School...
I like the flow you got rolling with this beat. For the most part, the rhyme scheme is tight. The last line "I took you off the shelf n dropped ya on yaself" doesnt work too well with the flow. I would've ended that last line with a rhyme of "scene". Maybe, "I burst the thermometer then poured out the mercury".
I think real battles should be freestyles, so I wouldnt expect Merc to respond till you hit em with a freestyle. (Or write a deadly homicidal verse)
I wouldn't expect em 2 respond. lmao, oh and the last line has to do with the rest of the of the lyrics, plus I'm refering to the remix's Biggies verse
This smells like mud!
I imagine an undead army marching in a foul-smelling marsh/wetland setting when I listen to this track. The undead soldiers look like cheesy 80's costumed zombies with clearly fake plastic masks, but the are the real deal. They are on their way to fight a horde of minotaurs and Tony Danza clones (the clones are equipped with a zucchini swords and a pizza box shields) . The battle will be epic. The music gets the zombies pumped up and ready for battle.
-This was the best way I could think of reviewing this track, so bon appetite on this delicious constructive criticism.
AMAZING!
Decent Attempt
Merc wins this bout. Your first round "attack" was str8 wack, sorry man... but the mixed track with none of your lyrics on it was just lame...
that being said: This track is a decent attempt. Your tone and flow is close to spot on. Sampling a great New York emcee like Immortal Technique was tight. Did you add the scratch FX? You are steppin up your game with major steps(lyrically, vocally and technically). I like this track, but I gotta give my vote to Merc.
Keep at it bro.
yeah i mixed it myself n the attack thing I dno, I was jus fuckin around it's nutin serious
Again; thanks for the new uploads.
Both these new tracks are impressive. The Ironman track was a little more conventional rap/hip hop, while this one has that good ole Fleshraker trademark bizarreness to it (I mean that as a compliment). I'm diggin Heist's verses too.
Holy shmidtt, the last half was freestyled? That's insane...
yea man, homie just went in the boooth high as hell and killed that verse, thanks for the review
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