MaoDaMighty's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[RAGE QUIT!]

HULK SMASH,MY XBOX HAS THE RING OF DEATH! WHAT!!

I'M SATISFIED, I'M PRETTY SURE I CAN IDENTIFY MOST OF THE REFERENCES IN THIS.

"Sharper than a BattleToad" good line, but shit man, that's not saying much is it? I mean toads are generally soft/gushy creatures.

I particularly like the opening lines of this, "I'm an asshole, and my momma's a bitch" although, saying you're a "son of a bitch" is kinda redundant. I'm just trying to pick out stupid shit so that this review looks constructive and intelligent, cause chances are no-ones going to read it. But if they read it carefully they will notice it is a lil bit constructive, but not really, but kinda, but at the same time, just a lil bit, like two quarters.
Theflowisreallydopetoo,you'revoicerea llysellsthenerdragevibeyou'regoingfor .Maybeanerdyskitatthebeginingwouldbef unny,likesomenerdspazzingoutcausehego tnoobtubedinCoDMW3.Iwouldlaugh@that,w ouldn'tyou,Ithinkso,whatdoyouthink?It doesntmattercauseImalwaysright,eh?Yay !
The beat is cool as a ice 2, for sure, no doubt aboot it yo!

This one time I was playing Assassins Creed 2 and my Xbox started to overheat and it shut off and the red eye of death appeared, so I went to an orphanage and went Anakin Skywalker on em. Ok that's a lie, I actaully didn't do that, but I thought about it, actually that's a lie too, I just thought about it now. So ya....

DOPE SONG MADFLOW Mackdaddy!

I was going to give this a 9/10 but I dont feel like making you cry.

Luke responds:

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[Nghh - Byron Vs Matatat]

NGHH WINTER BATTLE #5

Bryon: The slowing down intro lines really led way for his second fast verse. Interesting/original shots for the most part; "you're a caterpillar, Im hunting you down like a bird", "cut yourself for some thrills". I like how we used material from his first in his second to resonate the shots. The fast flow was dope, but some minor cuts were noticeable(eg. pretty shitty/cut/).

Matatat: Consistent flow throughout. Like the intro to rap battle line. The mathematics were dope. The acronym spelling of Bryon's name was cool; he utilized them letter really well. His second verse had some nice flips in it. At times a few of his lines felt rushed, making some words difficult to catch. His ending was fairly neutral too, but props for the NG closure.

This was a very close battle; both were entertaining and brought top notch skillz to this match. For me the deciding factor came down to Matatat misspelling his own name. Bryon's spellcheck line seal it for me.

Bryon wins it.

[Nghh - Richard Vs Iinsomniiac]

NGHH Battle #3

I liked Richard J. Amtmann III's flow more. Richard wins.
(I would give this a proper examination and rationale, but...)

Good battle.

[Fear Inducing Machine 4 B]

Momma Mia!

Me like!

Reminds me of Trans Siberian Orchestra and DJ Delinquient mixed with some Metallica on top of a orgasmic angel choir.

[heavyurb freestylin]

CHYEA!

THIS IS WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT!

This sounds authentic. You got the presence down, you got the energy/delivery and the flow is dope! Of course there are some slip, but this a freestyle, who cares! The content is great, which is all the matters in this. Real nice work Urb

HeavyUrb responds:

guess i sound better unrehearsed when theres no lyrics to try to say its live guess that how i should do it more often.

[U aint scarin nothin]

I agree with Luke..

but... I think you should upload shit in order to get feedback, criticism and advice. Theres nothing wrong with refining your ish before uploading but you gotta start somewhere. The one of the best things about NGs, sometime people will give you some useful words, instead of just nonsense hate.

As for the lyrics; I say, its like flow, practice makes perfect. This is gonna sound cheesy but reading is one best things for improving your writing ability. I used to write rhymes before I was reading for my leisure , and I was doing real simple single syllable shit... but when I started reading more and more, my vocab and knowledge increased greatly. Also became more aware of other literary devices I could use in my writing. Lol, it still sounds corny, but I found that it worked for me.

As for flow; freestyle. Work on your natural flow, build that confidence in the force and just go with it. Record em, listen to em, then move on. I try to do at least one freestyle a week. Im still pretty bad at freestyling but it is what it is.

Keep it droppin Urbs

[ni hao]

Wo xiquan!

Haode!! Wo ai mei nu!
Asian girls make the world worth living in. You got nice relaxed tone with your style and real clever lyrics. I'd say you could work on keeping your energy/presence concentrated, you start this track out sounding like you're have fun, but by about the half point, it sounds a sounding a bit dull, which in turn makes your words sounds a bit dull. It also sounds like theres a nasty reverb on your vocals, which makes it difficult to understand. Keep at it bro.

-Mao

HeavyUrb responds:

thanks ma,n i think i lost interest or focus during half my verse. i got so distracted that day i never came back to it.t yea i'd like to see what you thought of marz's version. i think i havnt surpassed him on his original ideas yet

[Outcome Is Critical (Draft)]

DOPE!

Gritty sounds here Jinzo! Might freestyle on this one later :P

SouthPawStyle responds:

haha word these drums are so grimey, and droppin a freestyle would be really dope too

[NGHH - Fat Beats vs HeavyUrb]

NGHH BATTLE #1

Fatbeats:
I liked his sinister sound. His flow was alight; had nice energy.
His first verse was very difficult to understand though; maybe if he mixed his verses a lil better this wouldn't be as much of a problem (by the 2nd verse it was batter though) I can't knock him for his accent, I listened to his verses a couple time to get most of it.

HeavyUrb:
I liked his unorthodox vocabulary and his mixing trick were refreshing (the skttt! cv radio thing was interesting). His verses were more audible than Fatbeats. Urbs flow needs some work though; I think this could be remedied by memorizing/practicing his lyrics a lil more, it sounds like he's a lil uncomfortable on some flows.

I'm gonna give this one to HeavyUrb, the line: "Let me critique you for one, you lack emotion all I could hear is jibberish in motion" That line made me laugh. I did enjoy listening to Fatbeats though, his flow was crazy, but when the words don't catch, it doesn't matter how cool the flow is.

Props to both Fatbeats and HeavyUrb; keep at it gentlemen.

[HDC Presents: JackKnife Vs.ER]

Don't Blame ME!

Jack had the flow and swag, ER had the lyrics and LOLz!

I'm gonna give this one to ER 901 606 though. The way Jack "changed" his voice from the first to second verse was weird. ER kept it consistent through out.

HDC responds:

Cool vote bro :)