MaoDaMighty's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[HipHOPcrACY]

Mad sick

All I gotta say, this beat is gritty evil! I love it!

[Impoverty diss]

Win!

Nicely done bro. Great work on the fast flow. You dont need perfect rhymes when you hit em so fast he doesnt even know what happened. Nice call on the ad libs.

Broken-Needle responds:

best part is only the intro statement didnt rhyme... n ye we kno who won b4 it even started... pussy ass has 2 hide...

[Poundcake Speech]

Great work

I gotta give you props for your attempt to bring thought into your rap. You might want to amp up your vocal level a bit more and possibly add some overdubs in the future. Doing this might make your message more evident to the listener. Overall: good track, keep at it man

Deeper-Kyo responds:

Thanks for the feedback. The overdubs are actually in there, but I probably have them turned down too low. Since I mastered it myself, I'll have to do a bit more work on it. Still doing my best to learn and improve.

[Broken Needle Dick]

Meh...

This is the first song I've heard of yours, so I won't judge your skillz based on this submission. The track isnt terrible, but there are some editing and flow issues. For a diss it's decent. The first verse is fairly weak, I was bored, but the second verse is acceptable. I like the line like "we made an account for dissin you" <- nice! This will be an interesting battle.

[Save the earth, second lesson]

Atta boy.

Nice work man. Im loving the positve message you're trying to spread. You're ability to make a song that flows nicely from start to finish is amazing; I like the last bit of the track where you threw in that sound clip. The "God has a plan" sample, needs some refining ( it kind of breaks the motion of your track). You're delivery with this sort of sadness works fairly well.

Dude, I am proud of you. You are making worthy music with heart. Keep at it!

Broken-Needle responds:

=D thanks man, I love 2 make ppl proud, there's a first part to this too, I made it a while ago if u wanna c it same title jus not second lesson. I agree with the sample but it's to bring a nightmare quality like a post apacolyptic feeling to bring people to think about it more=) anyway im glad u liked it as much as i did,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[Wyze+KB - MC Burial(ayzee diss]

Ready.....FIGHT!

You damn insane B.C. mother fucker! This shit is psycho crazy! I cant wait to hear Casey Jone's response... I'll let you know who is the winner once I've heard both... but he's got quite a feat ahead of him. Impressive work man. Have a nice day!

Blasphem-E responds:

thanks for the review man

[Wyze + Gas - My Friend]

Meh...

Gasmasq's part seems to have some emotion in it; the listener can kinda of feel his desperation. Now, Mr. Wyze... You're part is alright, but there are some issues with the flow and tone. At times the flow feels inconsistent and rushed (rhythm man!). To jump on this track after Gasmasq, you kinda gotta follow his mood; I didnt get the same feeling from your take, you need some depression in your voice. Sell that pain to the listener!

I consider myself an artist. Some would call me an Art teacher. You should continue to make music because you are continually improving your skills with music. I wish my learning curb was as steep as yours has been lately. Like damn man, you're making impressive tracks, and on a regular basis. You got passion to make music, so keep making it!

Word to the Wyze: The best art comes from the heart. Inspiration is your only drug. and fuck ms. KADIEEx in the ass till she bleeds!

Blasphem-E responds:

lmao. FUCK HER WITH A DRILL!!!

Ya, I had tried to get some emotion, but unfortunately (or fortunately) I just was feeling too happy that day. was hard to get in that sad mood I was in when I wrote this.

Thanks for the review man

[Out Of My Head Ft. Matatat]

Hellz ya

Great drop on this beat. Your flow works near perfect in the beat. The beat is amazing, props to War-Spawn on that. The chowderhead line is iffy, it got my attention when I heard it, as if it was a bit chowdery... lol, Nice track man, keep it up

MATATAT responds:

haha worrdd i totally know what you mean, i put a lot of effort into the first two verses, came up with the first 4 bars of the 3rd and ran into a major road block, got through another 4 bars and then created the last 4 bars and needed something to fill haha

[-=Jesus-on-Crack=-]

Great title

The music is alright and the "lyrics" are funny. You get a 10 just for the imagery of Jesus tripping out to this track. I can just imagine Jesus playing an electronic piano in Los Vegas, while fire is raining down from the skies and hamburgers are eating people.

[Lyrical adaptation (feat Monk)]

Dopin Broken N

Great track right here. Monk is on fire and BN is dope. The overdubs were perfectly placed and what not. The only sore part for the last line "outside my lines": Your rapping had a aggressive tone, but then the last lines where you talk it, it doesnt really flow well... Other then that this track is wicked, keep at it!

Broken-Needle responds:

true, didnt rly think of that, i recorded them w.o the beat there