This is a great battle session
These series of battle tracks are fairly decent, from both competitors. It seems like you and Proze are buds, I got total respect if you're throwing these tracks at a good buddy, cause ya'll are just having good harmless fun while you're learning. Both you and Proze are putting together some relative lines in these disses. I got no verdict on a winner yet, so keep em up!
The "All your base" sample seemed a bit unnecessary...but... All your base are belong to us!
lmfao cant fuck wit it=D but reason y its there is cuz he talked about acid rain, and my beat was saying rainin over n over, so ye "all your base" lol anyway thanks=D
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Interesting Concept
The questions are insightful and have relevance; it's an interesting idea to go with the "Dumb it Down" beat. As mentioned before you gotta work on that flow, but its getting better. Maybe focus on your tone of voice, you're supposed to be asking questions, but it sounds like you just reading a script for some lines.
I gotta give you respect for the words you're dropping, they have meaning. Many people say it doesn't matter what you say, it's how you say it. I say fuck that! Put meaning in your lines, then the emotion will find your voice. Keep it up man! Peace
hmm...
It sounds like you got some Baroque influence with this Hip Hop track, it sounds decent. I like the change ups throughout the song, however it felt like the different flow together too well. As a stand alone beat, this is fairly epic, but if you want your beats to be rapped too, you'll need to make your beats more gradual with the transitions from theme to theme. This is a wicked track to listen to though. Nice work man, peace
Thanks man. I'm just here for quality critique. I never intended to make a song that's rappable, but the idea does sound interesting. Before you made your comment, I was unaware that Baroque even existed. Now that I do, I see the resemblance. Again, thanks for the review; I'll take these things to heart.
Welcom to Newgrounds!
You got very good lyrical structure to your raps, your rhymes and topic stay focused throughout the track, nice work man, keep at this! I cant wait to see what music you bring here!
Nice
Yah man just work on your flow and mastering then you'll have some fire.
Bang dat shizz!
Nice track dude! Only complaint I have is that it needs some vocals (which would probally make it less repetitive). Nice work.
I might add some vocals, not too sure about how my weird rap voice would sound with this though =\
Interesting
Strange...odd... I dont know man. Nice work on the few multi-syllable rhymes. This is an interesting track, I dont know whether to hate it or love it, so... Robot says, " It's good, Have a nice day"
lmfao, word I dno wut 2 make of it either but I like the idea=D
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