I agree with Frinniekins
Sexy... no gay though, sorry man. heehe kidding real nice song man, real smooth.
I agree with Frinniekins
Sexy... no gay though, sorry man. heehe kidding real nice song man, real smooth.
lmfao, no doubt, I like this shit a lot too. =D thanks man
Cool
Great flow on this track. I'm diggin the message from this track. I like the industrial sounding beat too. Keep at it.
thx man.... much more to come!
This is a great battle session
These series of battle tracks are fairly decent, from both competitors. It seems like you and Proze are buds, I got total respect if you're throwing these tracks at a good buddy, cause ya'll are just having good harmless fun while you're learning. Both you and Proze are putting together some relative lines in these disses. I got no verdict on a winner yet, so keep em up!
The "All your base" sample seemed a bit unnecessary...but... All your base are belong to us!
lmfao cant fuck wit it=D but reason y its there is cuz he talked about acid rain, and my beat was saying rainin over n over, so ye "all your base" lol anyway thanks=D
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
hmm...
It sounds like you got some Baroque influence with this Hip Hop track, it sounds decent. I like the change ups throughout the song, however it felt like the different flow together too well. As a stand alone beat, this is fairly epic, but if you want your beats to be rapped too, you'll need to make your beats more gradual with the transitions from theme to theme. This is a wicked track to listen to though. Nice work man, peace
Thanks man. I'm just here for quality critique. I never intended to make a song that's rappable, but the idea does sound interesting. Before you made your comment, I was unaware that Baroque even existed. Now that I do, I see the resemblance. Again, thanks for the review; I'll take these things to heart.
Bang dat shizz!
Nice track dude! Only complaint I have is that it needs some vocals (which would probally make it less repetitive). Nice work.
I might add some vocals, not too sure about how my weird rap voice would sound with this though =\
Interesting
Strange...odd... I dont know man. Nice work on the few multi-syllable rhymes. This is an interesting track, I dont know whether to hate it or love it, so... Robot says, " It's good, Have a nice day"
lmfao, word I dno wut 2 make of it either but I like the idea=D
Win!
Nicely done bro. Great work on the fast flow. You dont need perfect rhymes when you hit em so fast he doesnt even know what happened. Nice call on the ad libs.
best part is only the intro statement didnt rhyme... n ye we kno who won b4 it even started... pussy ass has 2 hide...
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