MaoDaMighty's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Big Red - Mr Jones]

Geat track

Im diggin the flow and the storytelling on this one. The overdubs sound too obvious in some places (mainly at the begining). Overall its a great track, keep at it.

BigRed responds:

Haha, yeah, I'm working on those. I don't actually like them at all, I'm not really good at them, I just figured I would try. If I keep muckin around I'll get something right someday! Thanks for the review!

[BTF - Lyrical Remix(Don'tStop)]

Quite Awesome-tastic

Interesting concept here. Its cool how your first fan wrote a bit of this. Asides from recording quality this is a wicked track. Lyrics are good, flow/emotion are spot on, and the beat is passionate.

I've been a fan of your music for awhile now, can I get a collab too? :D

FlyMusik responds:

Yes you certainly may get a colab =]. Send me a sound clip of you and i'll make a beat to it and write my own.

[Needle in ya ear]

Old School...

I like the flow you got rolling with this beat. For the most part, the rhyme scheme is tight. The last line "I took you off the shelf n dropped ya on yaself" doesnt work too well with the flow. I would've ended that last line with a rhyme of "scene". Maybe, "I burst the thermometer then poured out the mercury".

I think real battles should be freestyles, so I wouldnt expect Merc to respond till you hit em with a freestyle. (Or write a deadly homicidal verse)

Broken-Needle responds:

I wouldn't expect em 2 respond. lmao, oh and the last line has to do with the rest of the of the lyrics, plus I'm refering to the remix's Biggies verse

[Sting - Unstoppable Army]

This smells like mud!

I imagine an undead army marching in a foul-smelling marsh/wetland setting when I listen to this track. The undead soldiers look like cheesy 80's costumed zombies with clearly fake plastic masks, but the are the real deal. They are on their way to fight a horde of minotaurs and Tony Danza clones (the clones are equipped with a zucchini swords and a pizza box shields) . The battle will be epic. The music gets the zombies pumped up and ready for battle.

-This was the best way I could think of reviewing this track, so bon appetite on this delicious constructive criticism.

Blasphem-E responds:

AMAZING!

[Mercury wanna b BN(Bitch N*)]

Decent Attempt

Merc wins this bout. Your first round "attack" was str8 wack, sorry man... but the mixed track with none of your lyrics on it was just lame...

that being said: This track is a decent attempt. Your tone and flow is close to spot on. Sampling a great New York emcee like Immortal Technique was tight. Did you add the scratch FX? You are steppin up your game with major steps(lyrically, vocally and technically). I like this track, but I gotta give my vote to Merc.

Keep at it bro.

Broken-Needle responds:

yeah i mixed it myself n the attack thing I dno, I was jus fuckin around it's nutin serious

[Webspinner: Decrepit Ephemeral]

Again; thanks for the new uploads.

Both these new tracks are impressive. The Ironman track was a little more conventional rap/hip hop, while this one has that good ole Fleshraker trademark bizarreness to it (I mean that as a compliment). I'm diggin Heist's verses too.
Holy shmidtt, the last half was freestyled? That's insane...

Fleshraker responds:

yea man, homie just went in the boooth high as hell and killed that verse, thanks for the review

[Wyze+Gas - Spirits]

Good for a rough draft

I'll be looking forward to the re-done version of this song. I know both of you can do better this. Im not saying its bad, but its not amazing, yet!

Beat= great
1st rapper= expressive but unrefined
2nd rapper= sounds a little drunk

Blasphem-E responds:

YOU DON'T SMELL LIKE MUD! haha. Seriously though, always good to hear from you Mickey, we
ll be working on it.

[their not there when you need]

This could be a good intro for a full song

The lack of quality on this recorded poetry makes it seems gritty. It reminds me of the intro from Atmosphere's "Molly Cool". The beat is real though, great quality on it. Could you amplify the vocals a bit so that they can be heard, understand you probally dont got the best recording set up, but Im really diggin sound/mood of this one. Nice w0rk

juggaloallday responds:

yo thanks, and i love atmospher but i have never heard that song hahah...
my mic has been messing up so its been giving me problems
and yea when i get the full song ill make the lyrics better

[The Good Guy]

Hmm..

Beat= neato
Lyrics= interesting; they process some cleverness
The filter on the vocals= fail!

Overall, its an enjoyable track, minus the hugh pitched vocals.

TheMayoMonster responds:

My voice is worse without the filter. Trust me.