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and you'll have my review. The original review had something about unicorns and leprechauns in it I think, if not ,then add them in that review.
Read you chat history...
and you'll have my review. The original review had something about unicorns and leprechauns in it I think, if not ,then add them in that review.
haha, o Mickey...
Smooth like butta!
I like the verses, your flow rides smooth with the beat. I would've liked to hear some faster paced lines though, *variety*. Im diggin your message of unity, I completely agree with that philosophy. I think the chorus could be mastered a bit more; I know you got that Darth Vader breathing problem, so I feel a bit bad knockin you on this, but its fairly evident where you can hear the breaths on the chorus, I give you props for doing it in one take, though. The FX on the chorus is interesting, but Im not too sure they fit in this type of song. Overall: Very Decent track, congrats on the 100 releases, you've made a lot of progress, keep on droppin, when you're at 200 you'll be a juggernaut.
Darth vader line: FFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUu
I'll work on making the breathing less noticeable.
There's no FX on my part of the hook. that was mainly part of IGs beat.
Thanks for the review
Eirun is a little too harsh on ya.
You definately got your own sound, which is why I dig your style. I've heard that I sound whiny too, your voice has a more satirical tone then whiny. Now for this song: I like it. Great concept for the story. Really though? Aliens are comin 2021? Im going to hold you to that! If your true, all hail Wyze, re-incarnation of Nostradamus! If you're false, all fail Wyze, re-incarnation of Joseph Smith! As the flow goes: tight, but a few of the words at the end of the bars sound rushed, weakening the clarity of the words. I don't want to assume what you're saying, I want to know.
Overall: Great preview, but for the final product I'd suggest working on making those words clear as a Rocky Mountain natural spring with a nude forest sprite bathing in it. "Fap" to that, then make this track blast!
LMAO! No worries man, the final version of this track will be clear as fuck. Thanks for the thoughts
The beat doesnt fit Aesop's flow
Im diggin the intro, but this beat doesnt sound like it goes with Aesop Rock. I'd be interesting hearing some other remix from that album, especially "Five Fingers" of "None Shall Pass". The biggest problems with this beat are the lack of drums (the beat!), its hip hop after all, there should be a heavier bass line. Also that horn completely drowns out the vocals, boo! Anyway, Ill be looking forward to some more of these remixes.
Yeah, as I said, first time with hip-hop. But I actually do agree with you, I'm not entirely happy with the result. I was just experimenting with it and after a while I was tired of working with it so I just decided to call it quits and upload it to NG. Hopefully the next one will be better :)
Ouch, his momma doesnt love him
Dude you doing some damage here. I expect this track to be zero bombed like Hiroshima. Im really diggin the sampled cuts on the hook. Overall I like this song: flow's decent, your bro makes elite beats and the lyrics are clever.
Ya, my bro killed this. Glad you liked my side as well
It got my groove on...
Yah this definately has a more modern appeal compared to your previous appeal. I gotta agree on the piAno being a tad bit too loud though, on the second and third listen, I was hopin the piano would settle down a bit. But great feel on this track.
aight i see people dont like that haha
A B Cs!
I love that ABC verse. I remember when I first heard that back in the day, still dope! Pee on you mom, hahah, lyrical genius. Great freestyle, I chuckled at the "I've been stabbed" line. I'm gonna shoot you in the foot (maybe just the shoe, I dont want to make ya cry) with a BB gun so you can say you've been gatted down.
Anyway: Really really wicked awesome track. -1 cause the lines at the beginning are very difficult to understand.
it is my goal to do a track with you where the hook says: Put the gat away, it's caturday
I like it...
except for the obvious FL riff. The change ups were nice, they kinda of changed up a bit too abruptly, but it seemed to work for this song. Keep at it/
Hehe...you noticed....Ahhh, well, This was done on the Demo of FL Studios, sooooo...Yeaaahhh....
But, anyways, THANKS FOR THA RESPONSE!!!
I <3 you
First off: Great game OST choice! Fuck me sideways! Diablo is god!!
Second: The scratches are orgasmic!
Third: Nice vibes on this one. But as a Diablo fanboy, I was kinda turned off by the up-beat tone of this track. I want some grimy dirty shit when I hear the Tristam theme. Your take on it was definately unique so I gotta give ya props on it, but Griswold wouldn't be cruisin' to this, its not vile enough for his liking, maybe that peg-legged Wort kid would bounce to this though.
Overall: This is a SOJ but not an elite 6 slotted two handed sword. But I still loves it.
lol i see what your sayin.
i just got this chill vibe from that guitar sample and elaborated on that.
glad you liked it tho
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