DOPE!
Gritty sounds here Jinzo! Might freestyle on this one later :P
DOPE!
Gritty sounds here Jinzo! Might freestyle on this one later :P
haha word these drums are so grimey, and droppin a freestyle would be really dope too
Don't Blame ME!
Jack had the flow and swag, ER had the lyrics and LOLz!
I'm gonna give this one to ER 901 606 though. The way Jack "changed" his voice from the first to second verse was weird. ER kept it consistent through out.
Cool vote bro :)
I remember this beat...
Nice story telling Wyze. Not much crit on this to be honest, I'll let Ses troll by and give the word on how this sucks. But one thing I thought was that the lyrics/mood don't sound cohesive with the theme of the beat, maybe thats just my interpretation of the music; I think the bell melody is effective, but maybe the held synth notes counter act the feeling...
Remember your Ps and Qs :)
haha, thanks for the words man. And it's possible, I remember I originally wrote this to a different beat. Maybe I'm just getting a different feel off this beat then you
LYRICISM!
Yo Mikado, the lyricism on this track is superb; I'm loving the expanded vocabulary you got going on this track. The theme of the lyrics is real deep too; can really feeling the emotion of the literature in your flow. For critique: I'd say the clarity of some words could use a bit practice; because of the expressive nature of the lyrics you gotta to put a lot of passion behind the bars, but maybe a more comfortable and controlled delivery would get those words better heard.
Overall: great track bro, the beat and the lyrics are cohesive together and the replayibilty of this track is definitely there (been on loop for awhile). Keep em knockin my son :D
In that case, I may re-record this so that 9 can become a 10!
Just for clarification...
I was such a such nice guy that I trimmed this for Wyze cause he's a noob 4 lyfe. I sent Wyze two versions, one with the most amazing outro ever to be heard, ever and the other was just an average drunken hype track that was trimmed @ 1:57.
I never fuck around either! I was being serious: Wyze Stingray went to prison, Wyze Stingray beat your children, Wyze Stingray is the king of the building, Wyze Stingray, he's in there. Wyze in not stupid, Wyze is smooth, Wyze once had an orgy was 30 millions chicks at the same time. Wyze is looking away, Wyze is like a laser beam in the sky. <- Everything is FACT! This is a credible source.
Disregard any smart ass author response Wyze Stingray leaves. Unless he says that Mickey is the only reason this is hype.
Nope, everything is all true. Described me to a tee
Kung Fu Illaz!
Master Mikado, this collab is TOO INSANE! I can feel the universe implode, ahh!
Madflow drops that lethal nerdcore skill! T.R.E sonic booms the mo fo's out the planet, then spits them demonic rhymes, (Umbrelle ella ella, Hahahh!). PhrOzen harnesses the zen and rips the language of the sacred rap lords! The Beat is dope-o-matic. Great work gentlemen!
Thanks man!!!
Different...
hmm... interesting hype sir. Props on the alternative route though, I can dig it.
"i'm not saying hip-hops dead, but i'm hoping i;ve got the silver bullet for it's head" ^ this line is a bit concerning though... why would you want to kill hip hop?
Ha ha i'm just messing. Thanks for reviewing!
Lyrical Titans!
Glad to see this up, both of ya'll went it and did ya thing. I think Gasmasq won, no, actually I think MooGi won, no...actaully my vote goes for Klazik Nadi.
Mickey, you're an idiot. Quit riding Klazik's dick.
Classic Lyrics Meow!
This brings back memories of carving a hole into an apple with a jack knife. : ) Good times.
YEA GURL!!!!
Lil Teddy > MC Mickey
I think Klazik Nadi wins it.
This lines gets my vote:
"/im impervious to all of your nerdiness
Ob-Sess the mess doesn't think your courteous"
So in keeping my word in the "SECRET AGREEMENT"; I vote Mao as whackest; sounds like he/me needs to get stoned to death :P
Props to Benjadaninja, the beat is sick.
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