Whoa...
You've stepped up your rhyme scheme, this flows like soda. This is probably the best I've heard from ya (in my opinion). The beat is great, props to Randomheckler. Get the quality fixed on this, add a some ad lids or some shit, and I'll give this a 10. Feel the vibe bro.
hellz ye the beat is fire, you should leave it a review n let her kno cuz she thinks its not that good. I'm not a big fan of ad libs n shit, n dno how 2 work the quality, lol. I'm glad you dig this cuz there's more like this to come=)
This is what Im talking about!
"If you want to know whats wrong with the world listen to Patriot" and now...Best McRapper. The adlibs are excellentro. I like the non-structured songs (no choruses), so, yep. The flow was almost spot on through out, expect this line "cuz we all challenged mentally" it sounded rushed (but I'll round this 9.9 up to 10, because its Bitchmas). Great work, can't wait for the new year and the new music from ya. Keep it up Judge Judy!
FINALLY!! I've been waiting for a 10 from you for so long... jeez. But since you told me it actually got a 9.9 I don't feel like I deserve it :(
In response, I personally don't feel that that particular line is rushed.
I'm finding that ad libs add more personality to a song, as well as filling blank space with something that doesn't HAVE to rhyme...
The 'lack' of structure I actually picked up from MF Doom (of DangerDoom). That's how I started, but now that I can count bars and know where to arrange certain parts, I think it sounds a lot better.
Stay tuned! I'll be dropping a new one before the year's out!
I like it.
My favourite part of this is the contradicting lines, "Do we do it right, do it wrong, living weak, living strong, thinking nice, think in song" I like the flow at this part too, it works well with the lyrics. Great track bro, keep it flowin.
yeah man, contradiction or opposites was a big theme in this one. Love that collab btw thanks for the review.
Way better than Make it Rain
Not only is the quality better on this, the expression and flow is much improved. Great take on this.
Good looks bro lol...take a look at my other shit...SUPRSINGLY THE VOCALS SOUND GOOD SEEING AS HOW I WAS USING A COMPUTER MIC AT THE TIME -____-...yeah i know but shit is good now lol
Not the best
so you're also a victim of the yellow fever... that's all I gotta hear to give ya some props. I can't complain on this for it being a freestyle. The only thing I'd say is to keep the mic a consistant distance from your mouth to avoid the clipping and popping. The flow and lyrics are hopping considering.
i was recording with a fucked up mic...my flow ain't really like this anymore...so i really dont like it...im just tryna put all my old shit up before 2010....but i got some new REAL SHIT COMING THO good looks on the review
What Time is it?
I stopped wearing a watch, because worrying about what time it is, is such a waste of time. Instead I try to live my life in cycles: one part is spent being spontaneous and impulsive, one part is spent planning, one part spent reflecting on my achievements, failures, experiences and associations and one part is spent creating my world. Once a cycle is complete, I start again. As time drags on maybe new components will be added to my cycle, making each rotation more beneficial to my mental and spiritual development as my body grows older and my bones become more brittle. Time is immortal, we aren't, fighting against time only amplifies the loss. Accept the losing the battle and learn from what time brings you.
Great beat, insightful essay and congratulations on finishing your mid terms.
They were finals.
But that is quite the system you have set up. Good thoughts as well.
What a shame...
I thought King Darwin would be the next T-Payne/Kelly Clarkson/Fred Penner. "Water" was truly a work of art, but I guess it was a one hit wonder. I enjoy the auto-tune so much in this one, the singing is passionate and real, the lyrics are genius, but...it's missing... a pan flute and a banjo solo and possibly Nickleback.
Damn, good points. We should get on that
Im in the holiday spirit now!
I am dazed...I've been waiting for a new holiday tune to get my in the spirit. Thank you for delivering!
anythin for the holidaze haha, glad u enjoyed it.
Santa Clause is coming to town...
I'm really diggin that bell scale and the part at 1:06. The constant wind chime kinda gets annoying though (just like most Christmas songs). The drums are a bit too simple, but they work well with the accompaniment, I didnt much like the sound of the snare or the hi hat, they kind of sound shallow. Nice work on this though, that horn part is killer!
ha, hey thanks for an actual review man, it is somewhat simple, but im going to record to this one soon, and i set it up specifically for my lyrics, and when it comes to the drums, i wish i was better at drums, but im not too creative when it comes down to it...
but thanks for dropping by man, i really appreciate it
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