MaoDaMighty's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Needle reamains Broken(LyRik)]

The battle in the lounge

The dog in Duck hunt, Bahahaha! The smooth Fayde beat makes this sound like such a classy song. I hope you had a 3 piece suit on and sipping cognac as you recorded this. Win.

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

It's NAhhhhhthing

[Lyrik battle (Fuck u weak)]

Why????

...why man? You're above these juvenile reactions. I hope you confirmed with LrYiK, that he was actually attackin you.

you can call me a dick rider, whatever, but.... when you diss cats that I personally know have artist talent and honorable morals I got to shake my head.

So... if you checked your facts before droppin this and you know he was actually going at you then: Nice flow here, defiantly steppin up, props bro. Elevation is tops. I dont like how you "sampled" another artists work for more than half of your track. I doubt you have their permission to sample this...If you listened to that track, you'd understand he was saying that battles are done in quick succession, testing the competitors quick mind and lyrical command. So, to hit Lryik at his level you'd have to freestyle this.

I think you have talent, but sometimes your intentions are misguided. When we battled, we both knew we were writing, so the battle ground was set. It was a fair fight. But when it comes to freestyle (or quick writing jams) vs. written diss tracks, I'm going to choose the freestyle, because that is the nature of the game. I'm not too good at freestylin' myself ( I'm pretty bad at it actually), but it takes practice and passion to get it, so... if you're not freestyling on a daily basis, start trying it. I know you do this to get better, but if you're battling against opponents with advanced weaponry, you gotta upgrade your guns.

I've listened to Flow Battle a few times now, I wasnt able to finds any definite attacks to you, personally. The references were mostly vague, they could be about anybody.

I've told you this many times but, I really wish you'd spend time on tracks that mean something like Happy Days, Feel The Vibe, Touchin The Incline or even Goodbye Bitch Boy. You know when I started listening to your music, I know when you're being you on the mic and when you're just writing lyrics to be what you want to present to people.

Sorry for writing a fucking essay for these 17 bars, but this is 2010. I want you to elevate in the right direction. You got skills, I know yo can write about your life, I've heard you do it.

Again: If you clarified that Lryik was actually personally attacking you, then most of this review is void. If you had a conversation, man to man, before these bars were written then this review is bullshit.

Your skills are stepping up...Use these skills for the benefit of humanity.

Peace bro

Broken-Needle responds:

first off thanks 4 the 2010 review=D well i made this after i saw this:
"3.22 / 5.00 (+ 0.46)"
submission: Flow Battle with Lyrik
date: January 4, 2010
shots at me?

January 7, 2010
Author's Response:
haha I guess if ya wanna take it like that, but no not directly

so i wrote down a few bars cuz i wasnt sure it was aimed at me, n i thought it was one of nadi's friends not "LyRikLyNkLyNd" lyrik n I battled already I didn't wanna start dumb shit again. No worries 2010 is ma year=D as for freestyles if he really at that lvl then he should b more than happy 2 write it out=P and as for sampling the whole skit which doesnt belong 2 me I jus thought it fit perfectly to wut i was tryin 2 say. n didnt wanna waste time on something that wud get dismissed.
Anyway man thanks a lot for the lenghty review I'm always happy 2 see your help=) happy new years btw=)
Oh and ofcourse I'm gna benefit humanity=D u def dun gta worry bout that

[O.G Nerd]

Nice

Creative lyrics=win, Im not a fan of the beat though. I like this track cause I get all the referenece you make. And props on not dropping any L33T speak, I cant stand that talk. Keep up the nerdy words! Peace

MrWhiplash responds:

lol thanks man
I'm not too into leet myself
and the beat is an NG beat
its tetris so i figured it fitted lol
thanks tho

[[poe] Enlightenment ft[MN]

Finally...

a track I can review everything on:
+Poe: Great lyricism. "Does the rosebush have thorns or the thornbush have roses?" <- hellz ya!
+Namaste: He kills it with those first couple of bars, Im liking those rhymes. He's got more expression too.
+Beat: Basic but serves its purpose perfectly. Just has a great mood for ya'll to groove with. Keep trying that, it works!
The vocals don't sound that bad, you can tell that they are "watered" down a bit.
-What the fuck is with the odd millisecond vocal clips that dont quite fade out or clip. Listen at 1:56 for example.

Gasmasq responds:

the clips are breathing from the sample. err.... I mean... they're really watered down crash cymbals in reverse... yeah.... XD

[KOA]
..poe..

[Lacerate-a-haYdu]

If you get 0 bombed...

...it means your good enough to be hated and envied...so if you dont wanna get 0 bombed just be shit-tastic, its as simple as that.

As for this track: Great; ya flow with this HW beat like a flowing liquid (I got no creativity right now). The lyrics are like good meaningful lyrics. And the other stuff is like mighty fine stuff mixed with cool things. You know what I mean? Good musmix!

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

Thanx bro, i have too much creativity right now =)

[PJ - Lust]

Someone's getting laid tonight!

Somewhere across the world a fine chica is getting a dirty sanchez because this song is so sexy. Yummy :P. This beat is relatively simple but the simplicity gives it such a compatible and natural mood which in turn makes the beat fire. Greatness achieved.

PoyzenJam responds:

Yummy

[PJ - Martian's Misdemeano]

Welcome to 2010!

New year and new sounds from Fayde, I aint complaining, this is astrological funk! Keep it rockin this year!

PoyzenJam responds:

thanks mickey happy new yearrrrrrrr

[-=IG=- Alert! -=IG=-]

Yummy

I want to eat this! Everything about it is delicious.

InGenius responds:

Thanks. This was a special request for a smoking track from a buddy for his album. After I built the pad in the background out of some string samples I had lying around fed through alot of FX, I remembered hearing the hook vocal sample somewhere and knew it would work perfectly for this.

Peace

[[poe] Happy Goes Lucky WI]

Adorable...

Definitely something different from Mr. Masq, I like it, keep your portfolio diverse. There's a lot of lines I can relate to in this one, I really like the freestyling in the car, and the smiling(muscles pull) lines. I thought the beginning was a bit too abrupt, that could be how the beat comes in though. It sounds like this is bare of overdubs, that being it said. you were able to emphasize most of the significant words on you own accord, props. A few of the lines/words were a bit difficult to understand without lyrics posted: "it's the best that comes out sometimes" "sparrows beak"<- sounds like "sparrows bea..."

-1 because you didnt use auto-tune! Come on man, get with the times!! Fuck!

Gasmasq responds:

DAMMIT! I KNEW I SHOULD'VE FOLLOWED THE CROWD!
lol yeah, I know there's some production issues. I had about 10 minutes to sit down and do something last night and I wanted to get this out there. I figured I did okay enough to give y'all a preview. But yea, this will not be a work in progress for long, being that the editing issues are minor.
As always, thanks for the review mickey.
[KOA]poe