Collab!
First off, I love the original piece. I got agree with Bangjung, the vocals are pretty loud for some of the verses, I had to turn down the volume. Each of you do your own thing, and it flows nicely through each verse. If I had to pick who dropped it best, I'd have to say CW or Ryder.
Epic collab!
Kool man good critique. id say Ryder over CW personally. my verse has less bars than all the others too. so i think i brought the song in pretty nice. thx for the review fam. stay up.
~Rymix
Nice!
Smooth beat+carefree vibes+ wicked rhymes=chilled back listening. Great work on the vocals, Im diggin the lyrics and the flow is decent, not a bad outcome from using a shitty mic. Near the end of the verse it sounded like ya flow was falling a bit behind, but aside from that, solid track. I noticed there's some space for rhymes after your verse, maybe a guy could throw down some lines there :D
Thanks. And uh, are you down for that? I was thinking of writing another verse for the open space, but if you can or know someone who wants to, hit it up!
damn...
This is the first song I listened to as I woke up with a numbing headache, this soothed the pain away :) This puts a smile a face, and for that, I gotta give you top notch props! Well done dude! :D
YAY! I'm so glad you like it! Stick around, there's a rap in development for it (I say that a lot but I have a good feeling about this one)
Edit: and now you're on that rap with me, oh how time flies.
Grimy!
Wow. Im diggin every sound in this track. All I got is, Wow. This is beat is madness. Great work man.
Its got me noddin my head...
so its gotta be good! I like the switch ups you do throughout. The mastering is a bit under par, but I kinda like the distorted sound you threw into this. Keep at it.
Thanks man. I try my best =) lol. Im still trying to get the hang of it. Glad you liked it though. Tune in for more.
A new level...
This is probably the most expressive I've heard from you yet. I really enjoy the slight vibratto effect on the carried background strings. The picked quick strings sound a bit "artificial" though (I know you're limited to what sounds are at your disposal though...). For the most part, the beat suits the accompaniement well, although I thought the clap was a bit too oboxious. Def props on putting some low mood into the beat. Keep at it bro.
Thanks dude, I'll take a look at that clap. And ya, I'm trying to find better sounds.
Great lyrics but...
you gotta amp the lyrics a bit in the verses; The horn in this beat drowns out your vocals. Whats with the filter on your voice? It makes your vocals sound muffled. @1:30 is some serious biz. "If I didn't have it, I'd be something that I'm not.
I hope I find a way to take this message to the top," < great line!
Great take on this Haywyre/Fayde beat. Keep at it
Thanks Mickey, I got a shit mic so when I try to add in effects there's like a 90% failure rate. Shit'll be clean when the pro one comes in, in a few weeks :D Thanks for the review.
I really like how this came out.
It sounds real different. In all honesty in not a fan of the that twittering chip sound, but it kinda grows on yah after a while. The happy ambiance of this track is brilliant. I sure if every listened to this on a raining day, it would become sunny and birds would sing a bad ass melody. When the beats drops in at the beginning is nice too. From what I can tell this is very well mastered. Great work.
Nadi dissed communism...
so I'm on your side by association now. So you better win this for the COMMUNity!
lmao, kid really got no clue on what's goin on in the world... I told em 2 read the manifesto... but he too ignorant=( and I won since round 1=D lmfao
ericuraweird1, NO!
Thanks for removing 50's part in this. Another dope mash up. Although the "Lose Yourself" acca doesn't really fit this beat, it still sounds cool though.
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