Flowz!
Ya killed it with this. Some great flow on this one. I had to take off a point cause the audio quality on ya vocs seemed bit lower than your previously upped tracks. God damnit!, that flow is insane! Fatality.
Flowz!
Ya killed it with this. Some great flow on this one. I had to take off a point cause the audio quality on ya vocs seemed bit lower than your previously upped tracks. God damnit!, that flow is insane! Fatality.
Hmmm...
My biggest issue with this beat, is that the main piano beat is too repetitive, hopefully lyrics will solve this though. I really like the background piano, it really adds a nice calm serenity to the track. When the beat cuts out at the half point is nice too.
Glad you liked it overall, and yes, I see what you mean, I'm sure lyrics will fix that.
I agree with EternalXIII
This a good song to pass out to. This kinda mellow can get the brain conjuring up some vivid dreams. Great work bro.
thanks haha great descriptions both of you
Smooth yet gritty like sandpaper
The singing intro is great, instant attention grabber. Haahah Buick Regal. I gotta give ya a cheers for the Canada lines :D I thought the mixing was pretty good, but I thought that your vocals lost a bit of the crispness, as if you over mixed it (and over mixed the drinks too, you drunkard fool!). Nah, this is illness, props for doing this in one spit, dude's got skills!
Naw i didn't mix the drinks at all =)
Level Up.
Defiantly a step up, nice rhymes, I loved those opening bars, ya flow is dope on this Biggie beat. You start off with a fair amount of energy but near the end ya sound drained. I would say, don't record this one, put your energy into another track. Keep it fresh, ya know?
word lol its not like he'll ever even come close=) thanks 4 the review glad u like it
Who needs a beat?
Dude, this flowetry is insane! Realness at its finest!
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Gonna keep this one short:
-Keys are too much in the main section.
+The chorus is sick, I was gonna write this off till I heard that. God damnit its good! I like the crashes too.
Too much as in too loud?
Killin it!
Lyrically murdering with deadly precise wordplay. When you dropped the Spanish I was sold.
lol good looks man..but its not Spanish its Italiano molto regazzo
Decent!
The lyrics are great, the flow is on point on the most part, wicked is good and it really expresses the optimistic mood of the lyrics. I read your blog about having trouble writing hooks. Here's something I thought of quick:
When you startin at the bottom, resurrect the love
When you're stretched past your limits, give your border a shove
you know gotta the chance --------to be someone
You cant count yourself out, You know you can't give up
Keep at it man! This is so good music here!
I likw the energy of this one.
Ok so maybe the sounds you're using are very artificial sounding, but I really the brass melody you got in this. The changes up are genius, especially at about 1:50, it felt like the calm a storm. Good work man
Haha Thanks Mickey
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