Very subtle
The keys really add the touch to this. The beat adds a great feel to it; but I thought it was a bit too simple. Overall, I like the mellowness of it, this would be sick with some rap over it. Nice work 3C.
Very subtle
The keys really add the touch to this. The beat adds a great feel to it; but I thought it was a bit too simple. Overall, I like the mellowness of it, this would be sick with some rap over it. Nice work 3C.
Thank you for the kind review. I am continuing to work on the song and have started to write some lyrics.
Whoa...
Props on the consistent drops, I haven't listened to the other tracks you've been dropping lately, but this one is real. As Eppskevin mentioned, your timing has greatly improved, the lyrics are presented very well. I thought the beginning bars didnt sound as committed as the rest of track. The lyrics are great, really like the "message transluent on purpose/ hinding on the surface" line. A few of the "Sss" dont pick up too well on the mic, some sort of pop filter may rid the vocs of that.
Keep em droppin HeIsAlive, definitely got something here!
Thanks bud, I appreciate your review :D
Be sure to check out the other songs too, I love to hear what you have to say about my art. And I think im buying a new recording mic with all the gizmo's lol, so hopefully everything sounds a little better.
Madflex
Glitch: consistant flow, versatile hits, lyrical violence and references
-overdubs on first verse were a bit obivious and repetitive
-the delivery worked for the bars w/o drums, when the beat kicks the vocs sounds low. 2nd verse was delivered well.
MadFlex: energetic flow, direct attacks, figurative language, lyricism.
-vox sound a bit too reverb/echoed, but overall mixed well.
Both MCs brought an emmense amount of talent to this battle. I'd give this one to Madflex for his direct hits in verse1, and his committment to his shit in verse 2. Good battle here.
Difficult decision
Murda: Agressive flow and delivery. Octeroid "can't match [Grim's] flow or lyricism". Both verses contained good wordplay and rhyme schemes.
-generic material
-"you're on newgrounds, asshole"
Octeroid: Clever and direct hits. Interesting sound. Great counter lines with creative attacks. Flow went well with the beat.
-a few wording issues . eg. "sex outside of porn" so Grim is a pornstar? or cause he watches it?
- "simple ass lines, n*gga"
Both went at shot for shot. Despite the fact that Ockeroid's dialect made a few lines iffy, his shots had me laughing. Ockeroids 2nd verse effectively responded to Grims2nd, and then laid down the final shots. Murda's had better flow and lyricism. Delivery on both sides were decent but a few lines sounded rushed/hesitated.
In this case I'd rather listen to Murdaa's flow, but Ockeroid had the better battle. Ockteroid's effective flips and direct/clever shots at Murda won this. Props to both artists, this was a great battle.
Self
Self's flow went better with the beat. His response and flips in the 2nd verse were sick. Steve had some good lyrics but I thought the delivery didnt quite sell it. Good battle here, Self's energy/flow wins it.
Decent
Nice drop of bars here. Sounds like a single take rap, if so, much respect for that, some people clip it after a verse and then take it from there. This is talent you got here, keep it dropping UselessTalent.
Yea I did spit all 48 bars in one take
I also did it in NoChorusNeeded
I've been writing for awhile, a lot of practice and theres only room to get better :D
I'm glad you can dig it brotha
One Love
*NoChorusNeeded is no longer with us lol
Great vibe
Love the concious voice on this. The jazz sax and deep bass mixed with subtle beat got this beat cool. The flows complinent the feel the beat quite nicely. Great jam here, props Uno and Dan-D.
Thanks Bro :) Coming back to listen to this a few years later, it actually holds up. Props to you and the HDC Krew as well.
Rap indeed!
Like the sound of this! DL!
Like what you got!
The general feel of this is sick, but I'm not really feeling that flat snare. Nice loop here G!
All I want from the general feel is for it to be sick. The snare just goes along with the drum style trust me. There are many options. Glad it's a good loop.
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