Triptastic!
I'm waiting for the possible rap to this beat so I can give a better review. This is definately something unique you got here, expand the creativity into the cosmos and beyond!
Triptastic!
I'm waiting for the possible rap to this beat so I can give a better review. This is definately something unique you got here, expand the creativity into the cosmos and beyond!
Heh, you've seen the first verse I've got planned. That's the hope man. Thanks for the review
ugh...
Aight, since I hate the original song, Im fairly biased on this song. Its got a good techno beat to it but the high pitched vocals made my ears bleed. I agree with StompySan, this is better than the original( I think the original is sh*t)
lol i know this song isnt' for everyone. it was more to make fun of the original. thanks for the listen! <3
hummm....
Great work on this track, it has a defnite India vibe too it. I could imagine an Indian kat would be shoulder dancing to this song. Awesome job!
thanks so much for stopping by to listen and for the nice review! <3
Real!
Great track man, this is some real sh*t here. I like the line, "Its not a fashion, its not a bad habit, its a passion" so true. I got respect for this track, peace man
Yo thanx alot for Listenin!! Forreal, I truely appreciate it...
Ooooo....
+Great work on this track. This song is smooth bro, you have out done yourself on this one. Great work on the chorus and the verses are tight. You're flowin pro.The beat is passionate.
-To me the chorus kind of sounds like it would be in a boy band song (manly because of the choir sound you mixed in), I dont mean that as an insult, that was just my first thought on it. You are a good singer, but the chorus sounded a bit sappy too me. It suits the mood of the song, I just wasnt diggin it.
My favourite part of this track is the rapping. Overall this track is fire. Keep at it bro, peace
Thanks for the review. I agree on the chorus, melancholy and choirs are weak spots of mine, but i try to put them to good use instead of getting rid of them. Its not very typical for hiphop i guess but one has to make his own music right? Anyway thanks for the kinds words, it means a lot to me that people bother to post. Im new here at Newgrounds so i feel as if i've recieved a warm welcome with this song.
Awesome
Well Im not going to go into as much depth as this Wyze fool-hooligan below me. Im just gonna say this song made tears of orgasmic pleasure ooze from my soul. I need a bandaid. Great work. peace
a tear-soulgasm. Awesome! Thanks for the review ^_~
Wisdom...
I gave you a 10 just cause you used a voice clip from KRS-ONE, his is wisdom is true. "Rapper's spit lines that are mostly illegal, emcees spit lines to uplift their people". As for your rap, its alright, it sounds a bit tired/exhausted/sore-throated. Keep at it.
indeed, no worries, it shall b re-recorded soon as i get better
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