Hotdiggity
Yah, I agree with a BAF on this one, it's definitely got a steppin old school vibe to it. I was really feeling the sound on the drums though, I thought they could've used a little bit more punch to them. The breakdown is genius though, great dig on that. Keep at it bro! peace
Damn!
This is some serious flow here. The lyrics are genius. Definitely a great tribute to an amazing artist, by an amazing artist. Keep it flowin bro.
Thank You
Steppin up
For the most part, Im diggin your flow on this one. At some points it felt a little too choppy for my liking. Example:"I really hope I aint draggin anyone else down, but why the fuck should I care about any of you now?" The emotion on this one is fairly evident, I gotta give ya props on that. The singing on the chorus is decent, I like the vibe on it. Real smooth jam man, keep at this.
You know I didn't really notice the chopiness until I posted it and listened to it a couple times but I don't think it's too bad, and you know honestly I was pretty fucking tickled by the singing in this, I thought it sounded pretty decent too for never singing before. Thanks for the review as always man.
Tibetan hip hop
I love this. Its got the right amount of chill and punch to make this a real all around groove tapper. When ever you and PJ bust it out, its just magic. Keep at it bros.
lol thanks dude.
Hot diggity
This some smooth muze right here man. Im really loving the sax and all the small little ambient noises you put into this. Nicely done.
Thanks man, worked on this track for a while great to see you like it.
Damn...
This is some real smooth music here. I'm def digging the natural vibe of this. I'd be interested hearing a version with vocals. Very nicely done sir.
I'm glad you think it's smooth. Admittedly, it's pretty sloppy, but maybe sloppy is just an unkind way of calling something natural.
Thanks for the feedback.
Decent
Good:
-several clever lines and multi-syllable rhymes
-the ad libs in the background add some character
-you got appropiate tone of voice to suit the beat
-Props to Kid Crisis on the beat
-I like the ending.
Needs Work:
-Overdubbing every rhyming couplet really make this sound very novel (also the echo on them is too much).The dubs are too structured, it sounds fake and it distracts from the words that follow.
- At points your flow was choppy, particularly in the 2nd verse.
-Amp up the volume on the main vocal track.
Overall: For 20 minutes of work, its fairly decent. Keep at it.
Smooth
You put some personalized touch on your lines and flow. The singing at 1:30- 1:57 had a nice feel to it, but I thought it could have used a bit more emotion. Also, the vocal volume could use a little amping. This is a real dope beat, when I tried writing for it, I couldn't get anything that I felt comfortable expanding. Its nice hearing another kats take on it.
Well done man (on the song and the competition, let me know when you're planning another). Even if the competition isnt for a title, its a good way to get the creative juices flowing among fellow artists.
really this kinda sapped my creative juices, but gave me time to search around town for sum music for my album. I wish u would have been able to put 'of a coin' to this, but it went great on the teddygram beat. This is kinda difficult to rap to, but thats the point =) Also, singing is not my strong point, I just put that part in cuz I bombed an HW track that I sang on before and PJ disfavored my singing as well. It was kind of a ploy to put it out there n see if they said I'm gettin better at it or not, prolly not lol but I ain payin sumone to sing on a track thats goin on the net. Thanx for the review
Ch'yea!!!
This a series of beats Ill be keeping an eye (or ear) out for. This beat is real boss , I, really diggin how this outro'd.
thanks broo
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