MaoDaMighty's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[All's Well]

mmmmm this is that smooth jazzy syzzzzurp cascading down bluesy cool wave of chill vibes. Really like the vocal sample cut-up bridge. News sound of twenty20 sounding dope Piche!

[Christmas Dream]

Gosh damn that is Christmasy spirity!!

[No Poppa]

fuck this is dope as all hell!

[The Galaxy Is At Peace]

Beautiful!

[Kings voice]

Very rich and audible!

[Female Voice Demo Reel]

Damn very nice!!

[DEMO REEL (OLD)]

Samus is spot on! Nice range!

NeviAlden responds:

Oh man sorry for replying so late, thanks a lot! I appreciate it a bunch!~

I took a few takes for samus, I really wanted to get that whole "detached and tired" feeling for her. It seemed like it would fit~

[Vivisection]

Beat production is dope, no surprise there. Lyrics; on point, loving the introspective narrative, with some f-u attitude. Rhymes is good. I would recommend looking at a couple bars here and there to help build more schemes and patterns into the verse.At points it reads as if there are forced consecutive rhymes in some lines. For example:

My mom’s got a man who doesn't want to understand her skill;
Earth's at a standstill, everyone sits and shits while man shoots and kills;
Some take pills, others poke themselves with quills;
My writings take understanding will and power;
After a clean shower I flower while I glower at your steep inclinations;
Don't want an invitation to your divine inspiration;

- edit-

Mom's got a man, (shit!) doesn't understand her skill
She's at a stand-still. So we sit while the man shoots to kill
Take some pills, or poke yourself with the quill
I write to understand this, it takes power and will
As I shower my flower, I see your steep inclinations
I'm not wow'd by the tower, you can keep the invitation
-

Anyway, thats my 2 cents and a loonie. Solid concept, can't wait to hear when Avatar Caine is ready to drop!

libbyshimmz responds:

Thanks for the pointers Mick!

I'll see how your edit flows out loud and contemplate whether to change it or not. Likely will, but it remains to be seen.

[Old School Hip-Hop/Rap Instrumental]

Ok.