Raw!
You killed em man! The lyrics are tight and slick, Shadowville made a deadly beat. Great work man.
Raw!
You killed em man! The lyrics are tight and slick, Shadowville made a deadly beat. Great work man.
Grit
This is a pretty decent beat,its gritty, it reminds me of Gotham City at night, for some reason. Im not really digging the hi hat though, it might be a little to overpowering. Nicely done for a first beat, keep at it!
It's getting better...
6 days strong, thats impressive. If I could give you a tip; try to put some tone in your flow, it sounds like your bored spitting this (I'm a hyprocite, I do that too). The rhymes in this one were pretty tight, you stayed on beat fairly well. Keep at it man, peace
yeah, I know what you mean man, I'll work on it,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Since this isn't complete...
"House of the Rising Sun" god dam! I dig that song! Asfor this track, it doesnt feel like its achieves 36 chambers yet, @1:10 I think it would sound aight with some kind of quick hook( and maybe at the end of the second verse). I'm reviewing with my opinion based on the original song from which the sample is from. I think this track could be better then the original with a little more. I got nothing for editing/mixing tips though, keep at it.
Alright...
I got give you some respect for pumpin these tracks out everyday. For a diss track this is not terrible, the lyrics are decent and have some good lines in there, (I'm diggin" Like youz a villain/live in a mushroom kingdom/ son if u fuckin trippin/ya red fall off a screen). I gotta agree with Wyze, you should take time to make these tracks, they'd sound alot better. Out all these tracks you've put this is the only one I've been able to listen to for more than a minute. I mean no disrespect with this, I just don't like diss tracks that much. Not bad. peace
jumps all over youz
Like youz a villain
live in a mushroom kingdom
son if u fuckin trippin
ya red fall off a screen
Come back talk some green
Red fall off screeen AKA Mario died, come back talk some green I.e it's Luigi's turn
glad you listened to more than a minute of it=D
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Yep.
Its different, its creative, I like it.
Dude...
Yo man, how wierd is this. I did a track a few years back to this beat, the wierd thing is that it was that song that I feel defines me. WFT is that?
You're style is still bafflin me, I can't get enough of it. You're lyricism is top notch. I would compare you a little bit to Aesop Rock, only because of the definate style you each possess. The only negative feedback I can give is that you should try putting a little more "dialogue" dialogue, you're flow sounds like monologue at times, sometimes you want the listener to think they are having a conversation with the music. Great track man. *downloaded
great minds think alike, thnx bro
My thoughts.
The beginning part with sythns: Im not a big fan of those synth sounds, (it's very rare that I do like them in music. ) The melody they carry is very interesting but it just didn't hook me.
Second half with piano: I'm a fan of the piano in Hip hop, so... I'm diggin that.
The beat: It suits the accompainment well and it drives, so... I'm diggin that.
I only like reviewing music that I think is worth the effort listening to, you've been making some premo music, keep it up
Geez bro if only everyone else gave me reviews like urs bro... Man all i can say is thanks man i much appreciate tha reviews
Groovy!
I know I got a sneak peak of this track awhile, but Im gonna review it anyway. All I gotta say: FUCKIN GROOVY YO! I got this on my Ipod everytime I hear it, it puts a little strut in my walk.
Hahaha, that is awesome! I can almost picture that, lol! :D
Omni slash!
Epic sounds right here man, I wish I could give you some constructive feedback but your tunes blow the roof out. Well actaully the one thing I would say (this is a personal preference) I dont like the snare roll thing *popcorn sounding whatever it is* but its sparce enough throughout this track that I can over look it. The choir strings are tight. You should find a rapper to bust on this one (I don't think there are any rappers that can do justice to this beat though). Can you make some shitty tunes so I can give you shitty reviews, Im feeling like a kiss ass now. Peace man
LOL!! awesome review man seems like ur keepin track of my music thanks man, i need the feed back!
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